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A single body of life floated through the midst of nothing. Shining immensely in the pitch black of existence was the original, the first.
The original, being without a predecessor it would be the subject on the minds of everything that is yet to be created, the beginning.

'Why, What am I?'

'I know what I am, everything'

'Incomprehensible'

He did not know who or what was responding to his thoughts. Was it in his mind? Not one mind, three, each with a different perspective and gift. Each for every aspect of existence Mind, Body and Soul. Deciding that something should not have infinite power he split himself into three beings. Power, Wisdom and Love. God, Gaia and Venus.

'A universe with only one type of life is useless' stated Gaia

'Agreed, but what shall we do sister?' questioned God

'Create something that is controlled by our deepest desires' added Venus

'Light, Dark, Life and Death.'

'Death?'

'Ceasing to exist'

So started the creation of the universe. The three gods planned the creation out over a period of a single lifetime. The planning had been completed a day ahead of schedule, this left 8 days for the creation to commence.
©2005-2009 ~Nrgetic
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Chapter 1- Part 1

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:iconbeautifull-freak:
I personally think it's nicely written! Though I am a real fan of long sentences :giggle:
nah, beautifully written and I'm hoping to read more of this!

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconnrgetic:
I've just added more to it...i hope you like!

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:iconbeautifull-freak:
*goes off to read it*

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconasharksrevenge:
All right, good start! I like it already. I am also heading off to read more...

Jenny
:iconirrelavancesly:
wow... really enjoyed reading this. haha. beautifully written as well!

Sean.
:icongayahuaniel:
I like the way you wrote it, but I do think it's kinda short. I do like longer stories but well written, understandable. Cool. Amazing.

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Uuma quena en'mani lle ume (ri'mani lle umaya). (Uma ta ar'lava ta quena ten'irste'.)


Don't talk about what you have done (or what you are going to do). (Do it and let it speak for itself.)
:iconnrgetic:
i'm going to end up expanding it a great deal...maybe 3x more...i just have to revise the seven days of creation and come up with an eigth...also i hope to add more depth onto the occurence of gaia and venus

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HOLLA! Yo peeps this is the Nrgetic Falcon preaching to y'all. Looking for a song about Love, Gangsta Leans or Fight Scenes well come and check out my gallery.

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:icongayahuaniel:
Cool, I'm waiting for it!!!!!!!!!

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Uuma quena en'mani lle ume (ri'mani lle umaya). (Uma ta ar'lava ta quena ten'irste'.)


Don't talk about what you have done (or what you are going to do). (Do it and let it speak for itself.)
:iconevilneedscandy:
This is brilliant! It’s such a nice way to imagine the world began. I’m going to be this pieces first fav. :heart:

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